A friend of mine was thinking of making a Text Adventure and I showed this one as a great example of how drawings and sound effects could be used amazingly, cheers :)
Several times I tried to write scripts for short films. It was one of the hardest things I've ever done. And I've never finished one because it is just so hard.
I like your Jack London style setting, but the writing lacks structure. You're missing an entire first act, giving all the exposition in retrospective. Try and do some research on story circles and three-act structure. Hope this helps.
This is a really awesome game!!! I love the art, you must've worked reaaaly hard to get such a great result! I'm a fan and can't wait to play the rest!! And the fact that you have a french and english version really showes your dedication! Great job!!!
Maybe you could change that the text is seperatet from the pictures because sometimes I coudln't read it because of the Image.But over all I enjoyed playing this adventure!
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A friend of mine was thinking of making a Text Adventure and I showed this one as a great example of how drawings and sound effects could be used amazingly, cheers :)
Wow, great to hear that our jam project inspered someone :)
Several times I tried to write scripts for short films. It was one of the hardest things I've ever done. And I've never finished one because it is just so hard.
I like your Jack London style setting, but the writing lacks structure. You're missing an entire first act, giving all the exposition in retrospective. Try and do some research on story circles and three-act structure. Hope this helps.
This is a really awesome game!!! I love the art, you must've worked reaaaly hard to get such a great result! I'm a fan and can't wait to play the rest!! And the fact that you have a french and english version really showes your dedication! Great job!!!
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Golgot <3
What a great a game!! The art is awesome!
Maybe you could change that the text is seperatet from the pictures because sometimes I coudln't read it because of the Image.But over all I enjoyed playing this adventure!
Lots of hand drawn art - love it :)
Thanks!
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